whitehouse -25-

posted 2010.02.02 at 18:57

20100130 (1) - Turned off the "break" title in panel one earlier this week. Unlike the previous back-and-forth on 'trolls,' keeping this bit would technically double up the 'break' section titles to include 'break' (beginning in the basement bathroom) and 'break' (being this page). While DCR pages are being listed as "chapter -number-" instead of by scene, I'd rather avoid the issue entirely... both on the website and inside the narrative.

Also faded the border on panel one and gradated it in panel two. This works with the changes made to the previous page and nicely augments the "high white" of panel one. Made a similar adjustment to panel ten.

Also also applied the rescript. It's not massively different, but it's Different Enough. With a few hints at technical details that were otherwise lacking.