the operative -3-

posted 2010.02.02 at 19:05

20100120 (4) - Initial assembly from strips 133 - 136.

20100126 (2) - New line of dialogue added to panel eight. I mucked around with it for a good long while - leaned on, leaned off, tweaked, tweaked, tweaked... and eventually settled for keeping it. While it's not strictly necessary, it does add a minor detail to the narrative - a small piece that would be left out otherwise.